a new story!

ok, i've got this idea for a naruto story, it's untitled yet but heres the summary:

It was just utterly ridiculous how she was just suddenly there, a huge ball of pink just flying towards him, soaring back into his life.

does it sound good?...i've written the first 2 chapters and I'm thinking of continuing it but i'm not really sure...oh well, here's a sneak peek

She didn’t know how exactly this happened but right now, she was stuck with the berserker and Keiko and Kyo were fighting the sword-wielding nukenin. She didn’t realize that they had changed enemies until now. She was too busy throwing punches, thinking of her team mates, throwing punches, strategizing and throwing more punches.

She was thinking too much though because the berserker’s hands were suddenly on her waist and she was lifted off the ground. She just felt herself flying through the forest moments later, hitting branches, rocks, birds and it went on for god knows how long until she stopped and landed on a cushion. It was a warm, muscular cushion that smelled of sweat and masculinity.

Huh?

She looked below her and saw a pair of feet. She landed on someone.

any title suggestions?

Chapter 8 of OUFP is on the way, i'm just finishing up an proofreading....oh it's so sad...

Cherry Blossoms on Ice will be updated later (after I finish this post)...latest story will be VOID and it's angst...because, as I've read, angst makes the world go round (together with fluff!)

oh, I almost forgot, 2nd chapter of Paradox is up too!