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Friday, May 16, 2008

sneak peek!

it's time for chapter 8's 2nd sneak peek! here you go:

“My Lord, do you like my dress?”

Hades looked at the wondrous dress of silk and diamonds. “It is magnificent dear. Is there any occasion?”

“None, my lord, I would just like to please you.”

Minthe smiled her most radiant smile. She was flaunting her dress that truly fit her. It truly made her look regal.

“And indeed I am pleased.” Hades answered with traces of a smile.

If Andeon could belch, he would probably do it right now. But he was in the presence of his king and he attempted to show his reverence for him every way possible. But the nymph is sickeningly sweet and she bats her eyelashes excessively. He remembered his queen in what he calls her stance of effortless beauty; his queen was naturally sweet, the nymph was too much of a saccharine nuisance.

“Andeon.”

He snapped out of his reverie at the voice of his king.

“Make haste and ready my carriage, we,” he looked at Minthe,” will be strolling the upper world.”

“Oh, please do, thank you,” Minthe added.

You do not fool me, Andeon thought as he did as he was told.

is it too short? remember Andeon from the lingering twilight?

to anonymous, thank you so much for your support and feedback! feedback here or in the form of review is alright...so thanks!

i love my readers and reviewers!

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ok, you might despite Hades from Chapter 8 onwards, me too (but still, he's my favorite god).....Hades will be sooo grrr and Minthe will be b****ier than ever...

and, time for an Update Schedule, and guess what (you:what?) lol, you won't have to wait too long 'cause Chapter 8 will be out by the end of the month! there's no definite day but I'll surely update by then.

i'm out!

1 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Yeah! A new sneak peek. Sooooo glad I checked back again.

So Hades and Minthe are going to the upper world. Hopefully poor Persephone is not there to have to endure this too and Hades keeps Minthe away from her. Somehow don't think he will and he will probably just cause Persephone more heartache. Oh, is this where Minthe gets turned into a plant? Sure Demeter would be glad to help with this. Still hope, though, that Hades deals with this himself.

Thanks for the warning about Hades in upcoming chapters. Will this change later in the story? He is one of my favorite gods too, but with the way he is treating Persephone, it is hard not to think of him as a jerk. (Sorry if this is too harsh.) Does he even still love Persephone? Maybe Minthe's wish is coming true. I hope not. It is funny how Andeon and everyone else sees Minthe for what she really is but Hades doesn't. Would be interested to see Aphrodite's reaction to Minthe. Can't imagine she would be too pleased with her or Hades even for that matter.

Please feel free to ignore the questions etc. Can't wait for the next chapter and will keep checking back for updates.....Anonymous (still no name yet)

May 16, 2008 at 6:43 PM  

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