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random.chaotic.radical.

Wednesday, May 21, 2008

a new story!

ok, i've got this idea for a naruto story, it's untitled yet but heres the summary:

It was just utterly ridiculous how she was just suddenly there, a huge ball of pink just flying towards him, soaring back into his life.

does it sound good?...i've written the first 2 chapters and I'm thinking of continuing it but i'm not really sure...oh well, here's a sneak peek

She didn’t know how exactly this happened but right now, she was stuck with the berserker and Keiko and Kyo were fighting the sword-wielding nukenin. She didn’t realize that they had changed enemies until now. She was too busy throwing punches, thinking of her team mates, throwing punches, strategizing and throwing more punches.

She was thinking too much though because the berserker’s hands were suddenly on her waist and she was lifted off the ground. She just felt herself flying through the forest moments later, hitting branches, rocks, birds and it went on for god knows how long until she stopped and landed on a cushion. It was a warm, muscular cushion that smelled of sweat and masculinity.

Huh?

She looked below her and saw a pair of feet. She landed on someone.

any title suggestions?

Chapter 8 of OUFP is on the way, i'm just finishing up an proofreading....oh it's so sad...

Cherry Blossoms on Ice will be updated later (after I finish this post)...latest story will be VOID and it's angst...because, as I've read, angst makes the world go round (together with fluff!)

oh, I almost forgot, 2nd chapter of Paradox is up too!

Friday, May 16, 2008

sneak peek!

it's time for chapter 8's 2nd sneak peek! here you go:

“My Lord, do you like my dress?”

Hades looked at the wondrous dress of silk and diamonds. “It is magnificent dear. Is there any occasion?”

“None, my lord, I would just like to please you.”

Minthe smiled her most radiant smile. She was flaunting her dress that truly fit her. It truly made her look regal.

“And indeed I am pleased.” Hades answered with traces of a smile.

If Andeon could belch, he would probably do it right now. But he was in the presence of his king and he attempted to show his reverence for him every way possible. But the nymph is sickeningly sweet and she bats her eyelashes excessively. He remembered his queen in what he calls her stance of effortless beauty; his queen was naturally sweet, the nymph was too much of a saccharine nuisance.

“Andeon.”

He snapped out of his reverie at the voice of his king.

“Make haste and ready my carriage, we,” he looked at Minthe,” will be strolling the upper world.”

“Oh, please do, thank you,” Minthe added.

You do not fool me, Andeon thought as he did as he was told.

is it too short? remember Andeon from the lingering twilight?

to anonymous, thank you so much for your support and feedback! feedback here or in the form of review is alright...so thanks!

i love my readers and reviewers!

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ok, you might despite Hades from Chapter 8 onwards, me too (but still, he's my favorite god).....Hades will be sooo grrr and Minthe will be b****ier than ever...

and, time for an Update Schedule, and guess what (you:what?) lol, you won't have to wait too long 'cause Chapter 8 will be out by the end of the month! there's no definite day but I'll surely update by then.

i'm out!

Monday, May 12, 2008

okay, I updated Once Upon a Frozen Spring early...I just thought I shouldn't delay putting it up since it's done anyway

Chapter 16 of Overprotected will be posted soon, I'm so sorry for the delay...

forgive me if I'll ramble now..the poem I posted for Chapter 7 is actually the 2nd version, the first version, I actually just wrote on a whim so I decided to improve it and it's like a whole new poem but they basically say the same thing...

as you've seen in next chapter's sneak peek, I am introducing other gods into the story, although they do not play major parts in the story, I decided to put them in 'cause gods' affairs are usually very public and Aphrodite is one of the gods I'll put in, which I think will be totally cool (teehee), I always liked Aphrodite no matter how treacherous they portray ror to be, form the next chapter on, expect appearances of many other gods but Aphrodite will definitely have the most appearances...

anyway, i'd like your opinions, is my story being too dramatic? i really want it to be dramatic anyway, a lot more dramatic than The Lingering Twilight...

and yeah, about Minthe, she really should be a royal b***h, if you see her that way then i've written her character right, expect more of her self-glorifying moments in the future

next chapter is very dramatic, and i love it...i love writing it, it's fun- a little difficult but fun, although next chapter is anything but fun, it's all grief and heartbreak, and even so, i love it...i'll be posting an additional sneak peek after I've written the bulk of it

ok, ok I'll stop..have a good day

Thursday, May 8, 2008

dilemma...


I found this really beautiful artwork entitled Deep in The Underworld in deviantart. It's not really how I imagine Persephone's hair but nevertheless, it's a really good interpretation.

About the Brimos request I got, I can't really assure you that I can do it 'cause I'm not too familiar with the whole story, I think I'll have to read into it more but I'll try my best. Can you tell me your name/username in FF/ nickname.

I'm finishing up Chapter 7 of Once Upon a Fozen Spring but I'm still having trouble with Overprotected Chapter 16 but I'll still try to update on the provided date.

My Outline for OUFP is until Chapter 15 already and Chapter 8 is being written.

I decided that I'll be putting VOID as a chapter for Cherry Blossoms on Ice.

I have a new story: Omorfia. It's about Aphrodite and Hephaestus and it's in first person, a chapter for each of them.

I'm thinking of one really really good story for Naruto but I can't think of a good concept right now. Any Suggestions?

Sunday, May 4, 2008

FFnet skeds

UPDATE SCHEDULES:

Once Upon A Frozen Spring (a Greek Mythology fanfic) Chapter 7 on or before May 15
Cherry Blossoms on Ice(a Naruto fanfic) Chapter 4 on May 11
Overprotected (a Naruto fanfic) Chapter 16 on May 12
my schedule's full up to May 10 so please bear with me, thanks

here are the links to the stories above:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4113282/1/Once_Upon_A_Frozen_Spring
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4123449/1/Cherry_Blossoms_On_Ice
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3583449/1/Overprotected

to those who are patient enough to check this page, here's an additional preview of Chapter 7 (Once Upon a Frozen Spring):

“Lord Hades.”

He looked at the source of the voice.

“Ah, my dear, you are beautiful.”

She smiled her radiant smile.

“It is good to hear that I am no longer child,” she said gently, putting a little emphasis on the last word,” I was worrying you would treat me as one my lord.”

“I now know that I ought to treat you like a lady. But let us not talk about this, what did you need?”

“Nothing my lord, I have just remembered that the Lady will be coming home soon.”

“Ah, yes, yes.”

“…so I would like to keep you company.”

Hades smiled faintly but he was distracted as a messenger came in and informed them that the Queen is back.

The smile was suddenly wiped off Minthe’s face. It was followed by a look of pain.

“Is there something wrong, dear?” Hades asked.

“My lord,” Minthe’s frail voice said while clutching her chest, ”I feel pain. But do not mind me my Lord, the lady is here.”

“How can I not mind? Come now, let me bring you to your room.”

He took her in his arms and brought her to her chamber. He nodded to the messenger on the way. The messenger looked dumbstruck for a moment then it altered to panic. Now, he was left to explain to his Queen why exactly the Lord Hades cannot come to welcome her.

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Saturday, May 3, 2008

welcome

yes, this is my new and improved blog/update thingy...

i'll be posting update schedules for my ffnet fics and all other things associated to it..

maybe i'll use this a a journal too, dunno

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