okay, I updated Once Upon a Frozen Spring early...I just thought I shouldn't delay putting it up since it's done anyway
Chapter 16 of Overprotected will be posted soon, I'm so sorry for the delay...
forgive me if I'll ramble now..the poem I posted for Chapter 7 is actually the 2nd version, the first version, I actually just wrote on a whim so I decided to improve it and it's like a whole new poem but they basically say the same thing...
as you've seen in next chapter's sneak peek, I am introducing other gods into the story, although they do not play major parts in the story, I decided to put them in 'cause gods' affairs are usually very public and Aphrodite is one of the gods I'll put in, which I think will be totally cool (teehee), I always liked Aphrodite no matter how treacherous they portray ror to be, form the next chapter on, expect appearances of many other gods but Aphrodite will definitely have the most appearances...
anyway, i'd like your opinions, is my story being too dramatic? i really want it to be dramatic anyway, a lot more dramatic than The Lingering Twilight...
and yeah, about Minthe, she really should be a royal b***h, if you see her that way then i've written her character right, expect more of her self-glorifying moments in the future
next chapter is very dramatic, and i love it...i love writing it, it's fun- a little difficult but fun, although next chapter is anything but fun, it's all grief and heartbreak, and even so, i love it...i'll be posting an additional sneak peek after I've written the bulk of it
ok, ok I'll stop..have a good day

1 Comments:
Checked back to see if there was a sneak peak to the next chapter and found your posting. Not sure if you wanted people to respond here or at the Fanfiction Website but did want to respond to your question for you.
Your story is great! Don't think it is too dramatic at all. Love how you have developed the characters. You feel so sorry for Persephone and from your post it looks like there is even more heartbreak in the next two chapters for her. Marpessa and Hecate are wonderful and love how they are interreacting with the other characters. Minthe, she is coming across just like you say in your post and then some. And Hades, he is the most troubling. He loves Persephone but then hurts her by cheating on her and then has Minthe around. Can't believe he doesn't see what he is doing to Persephone and can't see Minthe for what she is. Am wondering if he will realize what he has done and if/how he fixes his mistakes with Persephone.
Hope this helps and is what you wanted......Anonymous (still no name yet)
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